PART 1

 

Editor Notes:

  • Audio Tears - cover
  • Add Subtitles for this one Mo scene

PART 2

ISRAEL MEMORIAL DAY - 2:22

  • Siren
  • Israeli Leadership speaking
  • Mentality of violence

Editor's Notes:

  • Clean up the B-roll - longer shots
  • Use the Wide crowd shot again for a long shot

AFTER STABBING - 6:18

  • Right after death
  • Woman tells her side of story (Pal side)
  • Police respond to Pals
  • Israeli reporter tells his side of story
  • conflict - between two narratives in one spot
  • Stakes are life and death

Editor's Notes: 

  • Could be shortened at the beginning and during the police action some now that this isn't going to sit at the beginning of the film

 

PART 3